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Feb 19 10 11:31 PM
at the manor, Criss and Liliana were saying goodbye to the nun.
“Thank you for everything!” Liliana exclaimed
said, “Would you wait just a moment here? I’ll be right back,” and left in a
hurry. Liliana couldn’t even say, “OK,” when he was already gone.
“And where could he be going now? She asked
the nun, but the nun just raised her shoulders. About five minutes later, the
sound of a car engine was heard. Criss came out of nowhere driving a red
Pontiac. Liliana’s mouth was wide open.
in the hell did you get this car?
“Oh, you know, I got my ways. Besides, we need
to change our image. If we keep driving that old van they’ll know for sure it’s
“And don’t you think this is going to attract
even more attention to us?”
looked at her and said, “OK can you stop whining and just get in the car?”
just sighed and turned around to say goodbye to the nun for the last time.
outside, the mysterious man was impatiently waiting for Vanessa to come back,
when he saw a red car drive by right in front of him. He thought, “
“#!@%, it’s them! And where the @*+@ is
knew he had no choice but to follow them and leave Vanessa behind. Besides, she
had her motorcycle and could catch up to him any time.
as soon as the red car drove by, Vanessa also passed by, apparently following
them as well. He felt relieved, and began to drive. He kept a certain distance
so he wouldn’t be seen that easily, but had to accelerate when he realized that
the Pontiac was driving faster.
“He must have seen me,” the man thought.
began to slow down so she could be next to the mysterious man’ car.
“Vanessa! Go get them!”
took out a gun and pointed it at Criss’s car.
Shoot the wheels or something!” the man yelled.
Vanessa didn’t shoot, and instead,, she pointed the gun at him.
the hell are you doing?!” he exclaimed.
Vanessa was about to shoot when the man
abruptly stepped on the brakes. His car began to zigzag and then to spin
around. Vanessa didn’t shoot and kept driving. The man got off the car saying,
“What the hell was that?!”
red Pontiac and the black motorcycle kept moving along the road for a while
until both stopped. Vanessa got off the bike and walked towards the red car.
She stood in front of the window.
“Oh my God! Are you going to kill me Vanessa?”
“Oh, whatever!” she replied.
took off her helmet. It was Liliana all along.
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Feb 20 10 9:55 PM
at the road by the manor, Vanessa was trying to untie herself as she walked
towards the road.
“Those bastards! I hate you Liliana!” she
got on the car and they left together, leaving the bike in the middle of the
finally arrived to a city of Le Havre Rouen. They had barely made their way
into town, when Criss said, “, we’re being followed again.”
“What!?” said Liliana as she turned around to
“Put your seatbelt on,” said Criss.
“What are we going to do?” she asked.
stepped firmly on the accelerator and began to make random turns on every
intersection, but no matter what he did, the other car was still behind them.
people almost got ran over, and a fruit stand was destroyed by one of the cars,
but none of them would give in.
just won’t give up!” Liliana screamed.
made another turn and found himself driving towards a storage. The gate was
slowly closing down. He accelerated even more and screamed, “Get down!”
“I said get down!”
and Criss took off their seat belts and ducked in their seats.
screamed as the car was about to get through the little gap that was left
between the floor and the gate. The gate tore away the roof of the car, making
sparks jump in every direction. Criss drove a little further inside the storage
until they finally stopped.
“C’mon, let’s go,” said Criss, panting out of
mysterious man parked in front of the gate and got off the car. He spotted one
of the men that worked there and said to him, “Hey! Hey, you! Come and open
this gate for me, would ya?”
and Liliana had barely started to tiptoe along their way through all the piles
of boxes and merchandise that created some sort of maze, when they heard a
voice call out to them.
“Come out of wherever you’re hiding! There’s
nowhere to run now! Just give yourself up!”
and Liliana remained silent and kept walking forward, without making any noise.
the man shot upwards, which made Liliana scream.
“Bingo!” the man exclaimed victoriously.
and Liliana began to walk faster. Then, a bullet hit a box next to Liliana’s
head. She screamed. Criss took her by the hand and they ran as fast as they
could. The man kept following them and shooting at them, missing every time.
Then, Criss quickly turned around to see if the man was still behind them, but
the man had disappeared. They stayed still for a moment, trying to predict from
what direction the man would attack next time. Then Criss heard a footstep and
turned around. But it was too late. The man shot Criss on the head. Criss came
to hit the floor and Liliana ran up to him and tried to wake him up. She held
him in her arms, crying.
Feb 20 10 10:00 PM
The man approached her, pointing the gun at
her, and said, “It’s over, there’s nothing you can do to help him. Now get up
and put your hands behind your head.” Liliana put Criss gently back on the
floor and slowly rose. When she was halfway up, she punched him between his
legs, making him flinch. She hit him on the back with her elbows and he fell on
She took advantage of that to run away as fast as she could. The man
got up, grabbed his gun, and began to chase her. She ran and ran, until she
finally spotted another gate. And best of all, it was wide open! She ran
towards it with all the strength that was left in her. The feeling of freedom
attracted her, as a moth is attracted to the light. She finally got out. The
light blinded her. But it wasn’t over. It had just gotten worse, as she saw
herself surrounded by police cars and cops pointing at her and telling her,
“Put your hands behind your head!”
was as still and as cold as an ice berg.
“I repeat. Put your hands behind your head.”
did what she was told. Then the mysterious man walked by her. Liliana began to
point her hand at him, and screamed, “That’s him! He’s the one who’s been
trying to kill us! Get him!”
man smiled sarcastically at her, and took out his wallet. He showed her his
“I’m detective Adam Palmer. You’re under
couldn’t believe her eyes. The police had been following them all along, and
even Criss hadn’t realized it. Two cops came to her and handcuffed her.
“Take her away,” he said triumphantly.
cops grabbed Liliana by her arms, and just when they were about to take her to
the police car, another police office came out running from inside the storage,
saying, “Sir, the man is gone.”
was able to hear that. She knew Criss, and she knew he was up to something.
Strangely enough, she felt a rush of confidence through her body.
“Keep looking!” said Adam furiously.
was put in the car. She put no resistance, for she was sure that Criss would
come save her any minute. Of course, she couldn’t be certain of this, but her
hope was the only thing she had left and that was helping her to bear with the
looked from inside the car at how the police was desperately trying to find
Criss. She could tell by their worried faces that they had had no luck in doing
so. She kept looking, waiting for Criss to pull off one of his insane tricks.
But the cop started driving, and there was no sign of Criss. She kept looking
back, trying not to lose hope. She didn’t want to think that that was the end.
She wanted to believe, but maybe this time not even Criss would be able to do
anything. She was already caught by the cops. How could he even attempt to do
anything? He had miraculously survived the gunshot on his head, but could he
get away from the police just like that?
Feb 21 10 3:20 PM
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CH. 12- Survival
Adam and the other officers went
back inside the storage to search for Criss.
“Let’s split up. This place is like a maze.
He could be hiding anywhere. And be careful, he’s a dangerous man.”
cop took his one path inside the storage. They walked slowly but steadily, so
Criss wouldn’t sense them coming. He might already have a trap ready for them.
Adam heard a shot. He turned around but didn’t see anything. He yelled,
“Is everyone alright?”
voice echoed throughout the building. Most of the cops replied “Yes, sir.”
kept walking, and heard more shots. He immediately ran in the direction from
where the shot was heard. He found two dead officers. He called the others
through his radio. Some were still alive. But he kept hearing gun shots, and
each time they came from different directions until there was complete silence.
He tried to call the others but there was no response. He was sweating with the
adrenaline rushing through his system. The place was so quiet that the only
thing he could hear was his own breath.
froze. He raised his hands in the air and dropped his gun on the floor.
“Well, it seems like I was the one who got
caught in the end,” he said playfully.
“Shut up!” shouted Criss, as he held a gun
from one of the dead cops in his hand.
had a look of hatred on his face. Criss had never been so furious in his whole
life. This time, he felt able to do whatever he wanted. Criss put the gun
against Adam’s back.
“So, I think this is it, then.” Adam said, but
he didn’t look scared at all.
pulled the trigger, but there were no bullets left in the gun. Adam chuckled
evilly. He made a quick 180 degree turn on Criss and hit Criss’s arm, making
him drop his gun. Then he swiftly punched Criss on the face, and ran to where
his gun was to pick it up. Criss recovered quickly from the punch on his face
and jumped on Adam. Adam’s hand got so close to the gun, and he tried to reach
for it. But Criss was chocking him. He really wanted to kill him and stop this
whole mess as fast as possible. But Adam was able to grab the gun, and shoot
backwards, hitting Criss’s shoulder.
The bullet didn’t get stuck in him, but
rather just scratched him. Criss screamed in agony, and Adam was able to push
him away and point his gun at Criss. Criss kicked his gun away from Adam’s
hands, and then kicked him on the face. Then he tried to kick him a third time,
but this time Adam was fast enough to catch Criss’s foot in the air, and pulled
him towards himself, making Criss fall on his back. Adam got up and went to get
his gun back, but Criss wasn’t done fighting. He punched Adam in the stomach,
and as his anger built up, so did the strength of every punch with which he hit
Adam. Criss punched Adam on face over and over again. He hit Adam so fast and
so hard that Adam didn’t even have time to react and do anything. Criss gave
him his final punch, and Adam fell on the floor. Criss was breathing hard like
a wild beast. Adam was still alive and conscious, but he was so weak that he
couldn’t move, Criss wiped some of the sweat from his face with his hand, and
left in a hurry. He sneaked out of the storage and took a police car and left.
Feb 21 10 9:37 PM
inside the police car, Liliana was losing more and more hope as she got closer
to the prison. Until one of the windows shattered, and the car began to zigzag
on the road.
“Lily! Over here!” screamed Criss from the car
next to theirs.
said to herself, “I knew it! I knew he would come rescue me!”
began to crash his car against the police car to try to make it stray out of
the road, but the cop backfired by doing the same and shooting his gun at
Criss. Bullets began to hit every part of Criss’s car, but none of them hit
Criss. It was like the death was on his side. Criss desperately looked for a
gun in the drawer. He found one. He began to shoot the officer, and one of the
bullets struck him in his arm, making his lose control of the car. Criss
accelerated and made a wild turn in front of the police car to stop it.
police car where Liliana was being transported crashed on Criss’s car. Criss
hit himself on the forehead, but he was still alive. Liliana broke the window
with her handcuffs and managed to get out of the car. She went to help get Criss
who had gotten stuck in his car. Once he got out, the sound of sirens began to
get closer and closer. Both of the cars were wrecked and useless. They were
close to a bridge. They ran to it and jumped off of it into the water. The
police cars drove by without noticing them. Once they were gone, Criss and
Liliana came out of the water. They found a motored boat nearby. The hopped on
it and turned it on.
“Criss, where are we going to go now?”
“This time, I have no idea. But one thing’s
for sure: we’re getting away from these cops and out of this country.
so they began to travel along the river, and disappeared in the mist.
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